A Word

Feb 13

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Break my heart,
shatter my soul,
just say the right words,
and I swear I’ll go.
You’ve got what you wanted,
I’m battered and broken,
Just a word is enough;
Take my tears for a token.

I’ve got nothing left anyways.

~FireandIce

About Fire and Ice

I live for the pleasure of living. I write for the satisfaction of writing. I read so that I can be smart aleck :) I also love playing the violin and feedback, so comment to make me feel happy and let me know what I can work on. I contemplate the meaning of life in my spare time.

Posted on February 13, 2012, in Uncategorized and tagged , , , , . Bookmark the permalink. 4 Comments.

  1. Aya Wilson | February 13, 2012 at 7:14 pm

    sad, prayers, best wishes.

    Reply
  2. Beth Snowflakes | February 14, 2012 at 3:14 pm

    powerful expression on your broken heart.
    well done.

    Reply
  3. Bob | February 19, 2012 at 8:12 am

    Excellent flow and word usage, great writing on a sad subject.

    Reply
  4. Yajnaa | February 23, 2012 at 2:53 am

    nice style of writing.

    Reply

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